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Hetalia America X Reader Home Run! by MC-Sherlock Hetalia America X Reader Home Run! by MC-Sherlock
I have the story as a download and to read here!
XD WARNING LAME POKEMON REFERENCE! Well, I liked It!
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"No, I don't wanna wake up. Not yet."

"Come on. Open your eyes."

"Five more minutes, Dad. Please! Five more."

"No more minutes. Open those eyes and look at me."

Suddenly I realized that the voice urging me to wake up didn't belong to my father. And besides, I hadn't lived at home in over ten years.

"Come on. Look at me."

It took some effort, but I managed to open my eyes, a little. Light. Swirling light. A pain pounded in my head. I closed my eyes back tight for a moment and then tried again. This time there was a blurred face in the light.

I blinked a few times and the face slowly came into focus. A boy's face.

"Ok! Good! You're Ok! You had me worried (Your name)! HAHAHA!"

I blinked a few more times, trying to fight the pain and a wave of nausea. At least
I had a cute boy to watch while I did.

After a bit more blinking, I started to recognize the face. He is a tall blonde with a stubborn piece of hair that refused to lie down on his head (so it stuck straight up) ,wore glasses, and had a worried look on his face. This boy was none other than my best friend, Alfred F. Jones.

"Ugh...Alfred...What happened? Where am I?" I ask my hand rubbing at the throbbing pain in the back of my head.

"(Your name) DUDE! YOU'RE OK!!" Alfred says glomping me, making the pain even more intense.

"T-thanks! But seriously what happened! Where am I?" I say struggling to shove him off of me so I can sit up.

"You don't remember? WOW! You musta' been hit HAAAARD!" he says patting my hand. Only making me wince with more pain, instead of comforting me, ironically...

"...No...I do not remember, Alfred ...Otherwise I would not have asked you where I was and what the frigg happened, two freaking times." I glare wanting an answer.

"Oh! Sorry! We were playing baseball in gym, and it was Gilbert's turn to bat, so he hit the baseball...and it kinda came crashin' down and hit you in the back of the head..." He pauses. "AND OF COARSE ME BEING THE HERO, I CARRIED YOU HERE!" He spreads his arms out wide "TO THE NURSES OFFICE!"

I was lying on a small cot, still wearing my PE uniform, A gray shirt that said "W ACADEMY" and black shorts. The room has four other beds in it, all in a horizontal row. Since nobody really got hurt or sick often, the nurse only came when there was a serious injury, or somebody was really sick. For most minor things we just stayed in our dorms.

"O-oh...Thank you...You didn't have to carry me here! You could've just kicked me off to the side and said She'll be ok!." I say back smiling. I really feel like I don't deserve all the kindness he shows me...He can be OBNOXIOUS, stubborn and loud, but he could be really sweet when he wanted to be.

"What? That's what a HERO does! No need to thank me! HAHAHA!" Alfred laughs "Besides! You looked cute all passed out!" He blushes "And I wanted to make sure you were ok..." he looks down at the ground turning a deeper shade of red. "I-I mean, you are my bestest friend!" he says looking up and throwing his arm around my neck.

"It was really weird waking up! You were all blurry!" I say laughing. Suddenly I stop, I remember, before I realized my "Hero" was Alfred, did I really think this, loud, burger munching guy was...Cute? I blushed...Was...Was I falling for my best friend?

I'm not really that popular, I have a lot of friends, but I'm not the popular type! I'm a rather shy person...I just try my best to be nice...and some how, Alfred AKA Mr.Popular became my best friend! Most the time, we hung out after class, making fun of teachers and playing video games...Just a plutonic friendship...

Could It ever be anything...more? I think while taking a strand of my (Hair Length, Hair Colour) and twirling it between my fingers...

My thoughts were interrupted by Alfred clearing his throat.

*AHEM*

"Oh! Sorry! Yeah?" I say snapping out of my daze, and back into reality. Looking into his blue eyes...gosh...he WAS cute...

"Uhh...Mr.Coach-Guy ( Author Note: The PE Teacher, I'M SORRY! Names have escaped me...) says you still have to make up the baseball..." Alfred says averting his eyes from mine and blushing

"He had the teams leave out all the equipment...and said "I'll have (Your Name) put them away, for her make up work" then did a cartwheel..." he continues"What! There's like 30 people in that class! It's gonna take me along time, eh?" I sigh. I'm not that strong, or what people would call athletic...in fact, I remember getting tired playing baseball today, so I went to sit down, that's when Baseball used: Giga Impact on (Your name). Critical hit! It was super effective! (Your name) fainted...

"Don't worry!" Alfred grinned "THE HERO WILL HELP!! It's not fair to make a girl, like yourself do all the work" he said pointing at me, "Without a strong boy like me to help!" he said then moving his hand and pointing towards himself.

"Wow! Really?? Thank you so much! You really ARE my hero!" I giggle, causing him to blush yet again. Maybe...he liked me back...

"Well! There is one tiny little catch." he mentions grabbing my hand off the cot, then looking me in the eyes "You have to go on a date with me. Ok?" he says nervously waiting for your response.

"A...Alfred? You mean it? Your not joking?" I ask him shyly. There's probably no way my crush actually liked me back!

"I KNEW IT!" he says embarrassed. He drops my hand and buries his face in his hands. "There's no way you'd date me..." he mumbles.

"Hey! Alfred! I didn't say no..." I pause watching him pick his head up from his hands, curiously awaiting what I had to say next. "
"I'd love to go on a date with you Alfred." I whisper stroking his face with my hand.

"R-REALLY!?! DUDE! THAT'S AWESOME!! YOU WONT REGRET IT I PROMISE!!" He proclaims happily, a genuine smile lighting up his face.

"Well, shall we go put away the equipment now?" I ask with a smile tilting my head, witch causes more pain to my head... "OWCH...Darn it..." I say trying to make myself get off of the cot.

"Woah, woah, woah! Take it easy! I'll go put away all the junk, and you just rest. Then when I finish we can go on our date." He says pleased with his smart idea.

"Here, I'll also walk you to your room, so you can change and get you and ice pack, just because I am totally a hero." Alfred gets up and searches through one of the cupboards until he finds an ice pack, places it in my left hand and grabs my right hand with his left, and walks me to my room

When we get to my door Alfred smirks for a moment then bursts out laughing hysterically.
"HAHAHAHA!!"

"Whats so funny Alfie?" I look at him patting him on the shoulder, making sure he wasn't having like a hamburger withdrawal or something. (It's a serious condition people! *Shot* I was trying..to raise awareness...*SHOT SHOT SHOT* Ok! Gosh! Are you Swiss or something! I'll stop)

"Pfffft! I was thinkin' (Your name), even though Gilbert hit the baseball, I'M the one with a home run! HAHAHA!!" He keeps laughing tears in his eyes, putting his hand on the wall to keep himself from falling over. Aww! That was so corny and lame! But still cute! I think.

I walk over to Alfred and give him a kiss on the cheek. He stops laughing immediately, and blushes. "Ok, I'm going to change now" I say turning around quickly and walking away embarrassed.

But, Alfred grabs my hand causing me to come to a hault, with my door just a few feet away. Alfred grabs my shoulder and spins me around, not hesitating to kiss me full on the lips. I could faintly taste Coca-Cola. I leaned forward Alfred took my hands and held them in his , this was my FIRST kiss after all and it was hacking amazing! After awhile longer I had to pull away because I needed more air!

"Alright! I'll meet you back here ASAP!" Alfred says releasing my hands and running down the hall to so pick up the equipment for me.

"I LOVE YOU (Your name)!" Alfred shouts while continuing running at his full speed down the hallway, turning left to head to the outside corridor.

"I-I LOVE YOU TO ALFRED!!" I giggle as I shout back, placing the ice-pack he handed me earlier onto my head.
"AND HURRY! AS FAST AS YOU CAN ALFIE!" I shout again heading back into my room.

Please do. Thank you my hero!
I think Baseball has become my new favorite sport!


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Thank you all for reading this! I'm sorry It's pretty bad! I'm new to this whole thing! I think it's called a one-shot? I'm not sure! If anyone has tips I'll gladly accept them!! If anyone has any requests I'll be happy to do them! (I'd be surprised if anyone wanted ME to do a request Haha!!) Though, don't expect them right away! I'm just starting out at this kind of thing, so thinking of prompts will be a bit hard! And I'm bust sometimes! I just bought Dark Souls and our schools finals are really soon QAQ Witch makes me sad...Also, I'd prefer if they were easy to write about...I mean like nobody like Ladonia or Bulgaria...etc. Sorry. And If you have any tips on writing PLEASE let me know!!
Hetalia is indeed owned by the brilliant mind of Hidekaz Himaruya
I got the picture off of Google images, I do not own it.
But in this story America is allll yours!
Thanks you for your time! ~ MC-Sherlock

P.S HAPPY BIRTHDAY CUBA!!

P.S.S I couldn't figure out how to make this literature....sorry
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ThatOddPancake Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Student Artist
I'm just going to put this is my favorites... Mostly because... yo profile pic is Space Dandy. Also, great job! 10/10, I dun h8 m8... I r8
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MC-Sherlock Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for your r8 m8, and thanks for no h8 too! And Space Dandy is gresssst!
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hayleighthecat Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015
Hetalia + Pokemon = I OFFICIALLY LOVE UOU DEVIANT ART
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MC-Sherlock Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww thank you!!!
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XxsoulflightxX Featured By Owner Edited Apr 15, 2015  Student General Artist
that PKMN reference is amazing. 
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MC-Sherlock Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yussss thank you!! I'm glad you liked it!
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XxsoulflightxX Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015  Student General Artist
thank you for refrencing it X3
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InsanelyCute Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Hello dear!

I have used your picture as the header for my following poem:

Un-chibi, Neko-chan! by InsanelyCute
Thank you very much and Greetings from InsanelyCute!
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MC-Sherlock Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah thanks! But I just got it off of Google images
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InsanelyCute Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
i see! is it ok for me to use it?!
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MC-Sherlock Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I guess? Just say where you got the picture from and it should  be ok. Best of luck!
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InsanelyCute Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
well, i got the picture from you.
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PrincessNovaRose Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Student General Artist
I heard eh at the end of a sentence and knew this was Fem!Canada talking.
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NekoMiyoto Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Smexy
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evyboss103 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww omg it's 'Murica in a picachu costume!!!
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MC-Sherlock Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Isn't he cyuuuute!!
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evyboss103 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YUS HE IS ADORABLAH!!!
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AmuletAmethyst Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Student General Artist
i saw the picture and squealed like the demented pokemon anime manga and videogame fangirl that I am.
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MC-Sherlock Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Hahaha!! How wonderful!! I always love cross-overs of anime and videogames!
POKEMON FTW!
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AmuletAmethyst Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Student General Artist
IKR!!!
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LunaKittyArtist99 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student Artist
Cute!!!
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MC-Sherlock Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!!
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LunaKittyArtist99 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Student Artist
Welcome ;3
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airpIanes Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
That was awesome! I loved it! :heart:
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MC-Sherlock Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much!!
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airpIanes Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Your welcome! :D
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TigerRose1329 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Pikaaaa! :-D
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MC-Sherlock Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah!! Isn't he cute lookin!!
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TigerRose1329 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, definitely! :-D
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NinjaJaffaCake Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013   Artist
I'm not Swiss. But I am British. xD
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MC-Sherlock Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice!! I'm American...So Raah!! Lol JK!
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NinjaJaffaCake Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013   Artist
xD
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muriiChan Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
actually yep i am swiss... kinda... i live in swtzerland xD
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MC-Sherlock Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's awesome!! How is it there??
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muriiChan Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hmmmmmm well... i live in zurich... everything is kinda expensive.. but it's awesome here C: i luv it xD and i see everywhere asian tourists (*isbyherselfasian*)
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MC-Sherlock Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Woaah!! There's a lot of asian tourists where I live too, but I live in Washington State in the USA. I really want to move though!! Switzerland sounds so cool!!
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muriiChan Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it is :D and the chocolate... it's so fucking awesome you'll hate every other chocolate •~• it tastes like heaven •^• xD
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MC-Sherlock Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OwO I'm soooo jealous!! We have...ummm...CANADA!! AS OUR NEIGHBOR! That's honestly all I can think of...
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muriiChan Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
xDDD well... we have italy germany austria and france as neighbors....xDD
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MC-Sherlock Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Darn it...I can't think of another comeback!!
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Fab-912 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student General Artist
So cute! :iconyayamericaplz:
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MC-Sherlock Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Thanks!! I'm going to do another America one some time later
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Fab-912 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Student General Artist
And i will totally approve of it with my heroineness XD
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MC-Sherlock Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD YES!! THAT'S RIGHT!!! YOU TOTALLY WILL! (Remembers that picture)
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Fab-912 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Lolz :iconamericaxdplz:
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GardenGnosticJade Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
SO CUTE I HAE NO OTHER WORDS!!
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MC-Sherlock Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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nemo--kitten Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013   General Artist
This was very good and very sweet. I really enjoyed it. Very good story and perfect grammar (which some people on this site do not have) I don't like Alfred but this story made me fall in love with him! Very good!
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MC-Sherlock Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww thanks!! Yer makin me cry!! I tried my bestest!!
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ruethegoldfish Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
pffft, swiss
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